by Cheryl Owen Wilson
I’ve just returned from my first ever vacation in Italy. I woke this morning in Eugene, Oregon, and missed terribly the sound of church bells ringing. They rang, in every city on the hour, and in some on the half hour, during my stay in this colorful country. My favorites were in the small town of Cinque Terre-Monterosso, where I heard not only the usual bong, bong, etc., but the delicate tinkle of chimes as well. Forever more when I hear church bells ringing, an image of vibrantly colored homes looking as though carved from the very cliff sides where they cling along the Ligurian Sea, will appear in my mind.
As writers we are instructed to make certain we utilize the five senses in our stories. Our characters must see, taste, smell, touch and hear. For the purpose of my blog today, I’m going to focus on one sense—sound.
Ambient sounds permeate our daily lives. Yet, can you remember the first sound you heard this morning (that was not your alarm going off)? I asked this question randomly, and found most couldn’t recall the first sound of their day. However, when I asked them to describe the sounds of their last vacation they easily responded: Ocean waves, birds chirping, children’s laughter, music, etc. They then, without provocation, proceeded to describe a scene related to each sound.
There is a term for this in writer’s lingo: auditory imagery. It is when a writer uses sound to invoke an image in their readers minds. The result being their reader will both hear and see in equal measure.
What are the ambient sounds present in your story’s world? Is falling rain hitting the tiled roof of a villa utilized to invoke a sense of calm and peace? Or does the rain incite dread given the tiles are loose causing rain to leak through on to a valuable work of art? Do birds chirping arouse in your reader a vision of a Disney movie, or a scene from the 1963 movie, The Birds?
I find this form of using sound to be fascinating, and challenging. How do you find the perfect “sound” in order to illicit the image desired? As a writer, you know it’s by beginning the eternal, time sucking search for said word. For you must have the exact sound to match the image you are trying to invoke. Since there is a word for everything, of course there is a word for this search: onomatopoeia.
Now for an exercise in the use of auditory imagery. Should I have used gong, instead of bong, when trying to invoke in you, the image of an ancient bell tower in Italy? For those of you who are not writers, you now have a better understanding of why we as writers, are randomly described as crazy as loons, or have bats in our belfry. Try that on for auditory imagery. Go on, google the sound of a loon, and let your mind see and hear hundreds of bat wings flapping in a bell tower or better yet, someone’s mind.
As some of you are aware, I’m also a painter. Italy provided me with a rare opportunity to view art from Dali, to Picasso. However, Kandinsky was my favorite. As an artist Kandinsky used the sound of music as a muse (which some of us writer’s do as well). So, I thought it befitting to include his quote in this blog.
“Form itself, even if completely abstract … has its own inner sound.”
― Wassily Kandinsky
Every single word, in every single story is used to invoke an image. Sound is but one way to accomplish that end. In my stories I have the many sounds coming from swampy marshes to invoke the spine-chilling images I wish my readers to see. What are the sounds you use?